critical feedback
Aspects from each good e.g concepts but none of them felt complete, def include stop motion maybe one at the start and one at the end?
The logo writing needs to be applied in the correct place as set in the brief - think about combine concepts from each to form a more resolved ident.
Above shows the new and final storyboard for the ident. the opening scene from the ident is the stop motion coming in the place then moving on to the ball falling leading to the domino effect then moving out again to the stop motion again to end in a complete ident.
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